Response to Feedback on Word Animation

I wasn't sure if I had effectively displayed sound in my animation. In the feedback from my peers, they mentioned that the animation did express the qualities of sound in silence. This was probably the most surprising feedback I received. If I had more time... tough question. I felt I had plenty of time so I think it would of ended up very close to how I created it in the first place. This morning however, I was trying to fix up the ending but my program kept freezing up. This is why the animation seems to just kind of stop. I spent an hour trying to accomplish what would take thirty seconds. I want to bring in more poetic aspects into my work. I feel as though all my strategies arise from visual communication. To challenge myself further I am going to try and take what I have done so far and expand on it through poetry.